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Тема: Sketch fighter revenge. Final.
RRRRROMA
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16 November 2009 01:00
как я понял, выходной день — не в счёт =)
Фатыр Чурек
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16 November 2009 01:00
Анне скоро ответит, Саша заболел, Слава пока не добрался до компа.
Так что итоги будут подводиться завтра, я надеюсь.
Anne.Forschner
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16 November 2009 01:05
Yeah great work guys!!!! Love all of your sketches....hope the garbage vehicles look like that in the future :)

Schum1, LIMPAPo and frost are my winners!!

@ Schum1: your sketch style is so much fun, the vehicle has an interesting architecture, is compact and the driver has a different and definately more helpful windscreen than today — for more direct view on the street. Great!

@LIMPApO: your idea is very creative, i had to smile when i saw it. Brooms as wheels — brilliant :) Also the Design gives a positive feeling, its easy to understand and very clean. In my opinion, that is very important for the future.

@frost: Your actual concept is more traditional but i really like it, sketchwise and designwise. I imagine the container on top could trun arround 360 degree and that would definately be a help for the workers!

Nice work — keep going, it is pleasure to judge!!
Anne Forschner
Maksym Shkinder
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16 November 2009 12:35
Цитата: Anne.ForschnerYeah great work guys!!!! Love all of your sketches....hope the garbage vehicles look like that in the future :)

Schum1, LIMPAPo and frost are my winners!!

@ Schum1: your sketch style is so much fun, the vehicle has an interesting architecture, is compact and the driver has a different and definately more helpful windscreen than today — for more direct view on the street. Great!

@LIMPApO: your idea is very creative, i had to smile when i saw it. Brooms as wheels — brilliant :) Also the Design gives a positive feeling, its easy to understand and very clean. In my opinion, that is very important for the future.

@frost: Your actual concept is more traditional but i really like it, sketchwise and designwise. I imagine the container on top could trun arround 360 degree and that would definately be a help for the workers!

Nice work — keep going, it is pleasure to judge!!
Anne Forschner

Anne, the conclusion is very objective! Could be cool if you would keep on your visits to us for putting some comments)
Слава КПСС
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16 November 2009 22:55
Всем привет!
Огромное спасибо за доставленное удовольствие от просмотра ваших работ! Уровень хороший!

Я распределил места следующим образом:
1. schum1 (очень красивый автомобиль, компактный городской мусоровоз с понятной схемой работы)
2. One-O (современный стиль, привлекла концепция опускания кабины)
3. RRRRROMA (порадовала проработка конструктива, эскизы очень не аккуратны)
4. CARbofos (смущает функциональность этого мусоровоза, но подача великолепна!)
5. Simeonych (грамотный стеб на тему: что вижу о том и пою, повеселило!)

Хотел бы видеть выше уровень подачи

Ваш СС
Фатыр Чурек
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16 November 2009 23:19
Спасибо за коментарии, Слав!
Пока не буду торопиться поздравлять schum1 с победой — ждем еще одного нашего судью.
Кстати, не забывай, что на выполнения задания был всего час. Хотя... я бы, конечно, лучше нарисовал, но планшет сломался :)



Simeonych
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16 November 2009 23:31
Меня раскусили :)))
Ну не моя тема спецтранстпорт :)
Слава КПСС
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16 November 2009 23:53
Про час я знаю, задача сложная, но выполнимая. Самое интересное, что рисовати аккиратно и не аккуратно по времени практически одинаково.
04326032
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17 November 2009 01:28
аккуратно бывает нудно.
sasha
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17 November 2009 23:48
Hi everybody! i really need to say sorry for being so late and i completely understand if the results published will not represent my opinion! i was pretty sick over the past few days and could not even make it to the computer screen to look at the work! very very sorry!

I am super impressed with Cardesign.ru sketch fighter competition and feel very proud judging the finals!


Limpapo:

The impression is very positive, almost cute! friendly trash collector! why not? the idea with the wheels is interesting but probably not too realistic, but what the hell? why not? my main problem with your proposal is proportions of the vehicle! the car is too small! it almost looks like a toy because its wheelbase is THAT short! I know that there was no package request made by the competition but i think a trash collecting vehicle should be slightly larger than what you are showing. overall, good job tho, fun proposal!

Simeonych

Super, i like it! somehow even vw brand is recognizable! the recycling bag idea is also very well done and actually looks modern! almost a bmw concept car kind of modern :) very good job, really enjoyed looking at it. improvement recommendations? you know my point of view, your wheels suck!

frost

I like the cabin of your vehicle, there is something pretty modern and also pragmatic about it! unfortunately i am not a big fan of the trash compartment! it does not look too functional, opening so high up! also the sketch itself is not too strong, a little bit stale and washed out! please get this under control! a lot of your designs are suffering from this kind of washed out soft and undefined rendering.

Olegun

i have a difficult time connecting with your proposal! the cabin is so far back, and the car looks like it has two rows of seats and a tiny functional compartment compared to normal trash trucks! sketches are nice but also not anything new! better luck next time!

Maksym Shkinder,

Impressive sketches as always! very fun to look at! very impressive amount of work for JUST ONE HOUR! respect! slightly too sporty for my taste but i can understand why somebody would like to make a dump truck sporty! after all, those driving it are also humans and want to look good on the job! maybe not the most thought out proposal but strong nevertheless!

Schum1

Not too bad! interesting layout for the face! also in your case, the brand identity actually helps your proposal! not bad at all!

Puga Sergei,

Pretty good! slightly oldschool and a bit Colani but not bad! the sketch looks slightly too soft mainly due to the background brushwork! but hey, for a one hour job its not too bad! i like the contrast between the cabin formlanguage and the language of the functional part! nice idea.

Schum1

the rear view is not as successful as the front! sorry :)

barke

Sideview has some good drama! i like the wedge shape of the whole car! however i feel that the design is slightly too 2d and not worked out in 3d. very ornamental and not developed in 3d enough! nice stance in the sideview sketch tho!


Sharafiev Denis

Good sketch technique, very interesting impact! almost stencil style, really impressive! the design however is slightly disappointing... too conventional and generic. better luck next time!


Like a number 1

Impressive sketch at the first glance but actually not much more than random shape exploration! you definitely have a HUGE potential but you need to be more thoughtful... although hey, for ONE HOUR its not too bad!

RRRRRROMA

very good, i can relate to your style easily! the aesthetics and the sketch technique are very much my taste! the fact that you have a hint of a concept and a diagram explaining your thoughts only helps! good job!

043260232

nice sketches but... is this a stream of consciousness? there is no logic to the presentation, there is a lot of work but it does not look like the subject matter! sorry, talent alone is not enough to win this game! try to be a bit more logical in your presentation next time around!

Zayats

a dump truck for moscow? very aggressive and almost scary vehicle! the first sketch is very much Senja Kostromin inspired altho done nicely! i like the expression of the skull face, but do you really think this is the dump truck of the future? talent is obvious but i do not see you as a winner in this contest!

CARbofos

Super! unexpected layout, beautiful drawing, just a pleasure to look at! good job! i have nothing bad to say, just very impressive! unfortunate that you were not on time, i would love to have named you as the winner!

One-O

as expected a very strong proposal from you! very much a vw magellan era design but nevertheless still fresh and very clear! iconic! good job, loved your input! would have been good to see this object in other perspectives, but maybe time was a big limitation.

my winners are:

1. Simeonych
2. RRRRROMA
3. CARbofos
4. Schum1
5. One-O


i hope its not too big of a problem to name the late guys as third and fifth place! its unfortunate that they were not on time, i think there was a potential for one of them to end up as a winner on my list!


as a whole, i will repeat myself, it was a pleasure to see all of this work and the whole Sketch Fighter contest proved to be a huge success. thank you to Grisha and cardesign.ru,

s.

p.s. sorry for being late...